Mr. Major by Valkyrie's Hope
Not very many people were in the Twilight Fandom before Twilight became a movie. I was one of those few. Some people remember in February of 2008 when over a hundred different Twilight stories were kicked off of fanfiction.net, others don't. Amongst the stories that were deleted permanently was Mr. Major.
Mr Major was a Jasper/Bella story that was just over 300000 words long and 35 chapters including the prologue and epilogue. It was a controversial story, but it had 13000 reviews.
Mr. Major started right from where Bella was attacked by Jasper, only Edward wasn't able to stop him before the bite. Bella became a vampire and a bond between Jasper and Bella was created. Bella and Jasper were more or less forced into loving each other, yet they still loved their other.
The story continued down a path with Bella still wanting to be with Edward, yet drawn to Jasper. And Jasper drawn to Bella while wishing to remain with Alice. As the relationship between Bella and Jasper heated up Victoria was on the hunt for Bella.
The epilogue ended with the shocking conclusion of Victoria biting into Bella's neck. It left it open for a sequel. A sequel that we know will never come because the story was taken down, and the author logged out of fanfiction permanently.
If there was one thing that was certain. The sex was great, the blood was better, and the damn story line was amazing.
Mr Major was a Jasper/Bella story that was just over 300000 words long and 35 chapters including the prologue and epilogue. It was a controversial story, but it had 13000 reviews.
Mr. Major started right from where Bella was attacked by Jasper, only Edward wasn't able to stop him before the bite. Bella became a vampire and a bond between Jasper and Bella was created. Bella and Jasper were more or less forced into loving each other, yet they still loved their other.
The story continued down a path with Bella still wanting to be with Edward, yet drawn to Jasper. And Jasper drawn to Bella while wishing to remain with Alice. As the relationship between Bella and Jasper heated up Victoria was on the hunt for Bella.
The epilogue ended with the shocking conclusion of Victoria biting into Bella's neck. It left it open for a sequel. A sequel that we know will never come because the story was taken down, and the author logged out of fanfiction permanently.
If there was one thing that was certain. The sex was great, the blood was better, and the damn story line was amazing.
I have read a story similar to this. I don't remember the name of it and I never finished reading it for some odd reason but I wonder if it isn't the same story. It sounds strangely just like what you just described. I wish I could find it again just to see though. Now I am curious about this story.
ReplyDeleteIt is possible. If you remember when you read it I could tell you for sure whether there was a possibility of it being this one. This story was removed from Fanfiction February 13th of 2008, and the author was never able to post it again. He finally gave up, and now he won't have anything to do with Twilight Fanfiction anymore. If I wasn't a personal friend of his I wouldn't even be able to talk to him anymore. We live in the same area, so I knew him before he wrote the story. I am trying to convince him to let me post it here, but I have a feeling it will be easier to pull blood out of a turnip.
ReplyDeleteNo, it was most definitely way after that date. It makes me wonder if someone used the same idea, because it is creepily similar to this. I have searched and searched for it but can't find it anywhere. I thought I had it on my favorites list but I don't. If I find this story again, I'll let you know so you can see if it's similar or not. We know that some people in the fandom like to rip other people's story ideas off and I hope this isn't the case here. I would have loved to read this story though. Let's hope you can talk him into posting this story again somewhere. Maybe another ff site or a blog or something.
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